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I never cry...

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If there's a tear on my face
It makes me shiver to the bones it shakes me babe
It's just a heartache that got cought in my eye
and you know I never cry I never cry

Sometimes I drink more than I need
Until the T.V.'s dead and gone
I may be lonely but I'm never alone
and the night may pass me by
but I'll never cry

Take away take away my eyes
Sometimes I'd rather be blind
Break a heart break a heart of stone
Open it up but don't you leave it alone

'Cause that's all I've got to give to you
believe me babe it ain't been used
My heart's a virgin it ain't never been tried
and you know I'll never cry
and you know I'll never cry
and you know you know you know you know
I'll never cry, I'll never cry

Break a heart break a heart of stone
Open it up but don't you leave it alone

'Cause that's all I've got to give to you
believe me babe it ain't been used
My heart's a virgin it ain't never been tried
and you know I'll never cry
and you know I'll never cry
and you know you know you know you know
I'll never cry, I'll never cry

- "I never cry", Alice Cooper ([link])

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

VISION:

At First Glance, it looks all really nice.
What looks kind of awkward though, is the eye on the right. I don't know if it's just me, but it took a little while to notice he was wiping his tears from his eye (which I couldn't see) with his tissue. A Background could've been nice. Maybe a street, or something. Your Choice, really.


ORIGINALITY:
Seen this kind of things before, not really original, but still, how would you know?

TECHNIQUE:
I loved the style you made it in, and the shadow behind the character. You did a great job on this!

IMPACT:
This left quite the impact. It has a meaning behind it, a story. The Way it jumped out from the white was good too.

OVERALL RATING:

18 / 20